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2017-07-20 · 첨삭 강사 Eunice

학생이 쓴 원문

Who had the biggest impact on the person you have become? -> I think many people answer like this about this question. I've been impacted by my mom. She is so nice, kind and smart. She always teach me I can go to the good way. I resemble her, face and voice, and also I hope to resemble her personality. Sometimes, I'm so happy when I realize I've became to be similar my mom, I really respect her.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!


I love your answer, It\'s true, so do I, but not only my mother but my parents motivates me and they give a huge impact of being who I am right know.

Have a great day ahead^^

See you :)

~T. Eunice.



I think many people answer like this about this question.

>> I think many people could answer the same about this question.

I\'ve been impacted by my mom.

>> Correct

She is so nice, kind and smart.

>> Correct

She always teach me I can go to the good way.

>> She always teach me to always be in a good way.

OR

>> She taught me how to be good in every situation.

I resemble her, face and voice, and also I hope to resemble her personality.

>> I resemble her face and voice, I also hope that I can resemble her personality.

Sometimes, I\'m so happy when I realize I\'ve became to be similar my mom, I really respect her.

>> Sometimes, I\'m so happy when I realized that I\'ve become similar to my mom, I really respect her.  

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