Homework 7/19

2017-07-21 · 첨삭 강사 Eunice

학생이 쓴 원문

Have you ever spoken in front of a large group of people? How did it go? -> Maybe two years ago, when I studied French in Montreal, I had to do presentation twice. Because, they were of my necessary projects during that semester. So, I did it in front of our classmates and teacher. Those titles were introducing our country and culture. It was quiet nervous but I felt so satisfied when I was done. And, I could improve my French skill through preparing that presentations.

강사 첨삭

Happy Friday!

Hello there [이름]!

I didn\'t know that you\'ve studied French in Montreal, Canada. French is one of the hardest language to learn but you definitely nailed it. I am sure that you will also reach your optimum capability in honing your English skill.

Have a great day!^^

See you!

~T. Eunice

Maybe two years ago, when I studied French in Montreal, I had to do presentation twice.

>> Maybe two years ago, when I studied French in Montreal, I had to do a presentation twice.

Because, they were of my necessary projects during that semester.

>> Because, they were my necessary projects during that semester.

So, I did it in front of our classmates and teacher.

>> Correct

Those titles were introducing our country and culture.

>> Correct

>> I introduced to them about our country and culture.

It was quiet nervous but I felt so satisfied when I was done.

>> I was quite nervous but I felt so satisfied when I was done.

And, I could improve my French skill through preparing that presentations.

>> I could improve my French skill through preparing those presentations.

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기