Homework 7.22
학생이 쓴 원문
What is your biggest fear in life? Are you afraid that it might come true?
: My biggest fear in life is my family member\'s deterioration of health. I think health is the most important in life. I wish me and my family stay always healthy.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Michelle! ^^
T[이름]k you so much for doing your homework.
Enjoy your weekend! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
My biggest fear in life is my family member\'s deterioration of health.
>> CORRECT!
I think health is the most important in life.
>> I think health is the most important thing in life.
I wish me and my family stay always healthy.
>> I wish my family and I stay healthy always.
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