Homework 7

What would you consider as an economic weakness of Korea? korea have developed so fast at 50 years. so korea economic have some weakness that have to overcome. I would like to speak about material industry that is my major. IT companys import most of material from USA, Germany and Japan. If they can’t import, they can’t make their goods. korea have to develop the technique of material and loyalty. I think that investment to technological development is very important. T[이름]k you~~~

Hi there [이름]!^^ You are impressive with your ideas!^^ I have never realized things in the industry like that. You have proven your skills in the major that you chose.^^ T[이름]k you^^ T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: korea have developed so fast at 50 years. >> Korea has developed so fast for 50 years. so korea economic have some weakness that have to overcome. >> So Korea\'s economy have some weaknesses that it needs to overcome. I would like to speak about material industry that is my major. >> CORRECT OR> I\'d like to ralte it to my major in Material Industry. IT companys import most of material from USA, Germany and Japan. >> IT companies import most of the materiasl from the USA, Germany and Japan. If they can’t import, they can’t make their goods. >> CORRECT OR> Manufacturing is difficult if they don\'t import. korea have to develop the technique of material and loyalty. >> Korea has to develop the technique of material and loyalty. I think that investment to technological development is very important. T[이름]k you~~~ >> CORRECT OR> We must give attention to the improvement of technology.