Homework 7

ESSAY: Do you think that young adults having or owning a car is a luxury or a necessity? I think it is a luxury if young adults have a car. They can not earn much money, because they started work not long ago. However, cost for car maintenance is very high includng car insurance, oil price, and tax. So, I think it is time to save money for young adults to live a better life in the future. There is a time when we have to stand for later.

Hi there [이름]!^^ Young adults nowadays take pride in material things and that include cars. I do agree with you that owning a car has a lot of fincial responsibilities. Thank you for expressing your ideas!^^ Take care! T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: I think it is a luxury if young adults have a car. >> CORRECT OR> I will consider it a luxury if young poeple own cars. They can not earn much money, because they started work not long ago. >> CORRECT OR> They just started working but they do not earn much.However, cost for car maintenance is very high includng car insurance, oil price, and tax. >> However, the cost for car maintenance is very high including car insurance, oil price, and tax. So, I think it is time to save money for young adults to live a better life in the future. >> So, I think it is time for young adults to save money for a better life in the future. There is a time when we have to stand for later. >> CORRECT OR> We must put in mind that we must save for the future.