Homework(7/6): The difference between natural disasters and man-made disasters
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Oh !!!
Simple but we need to be careful. The basics are usually forgotten so we need to recall and remember again. Great job in getting a perfect score.
I hope that you\'ll learn from this activity and suggest that you\'ll remember everything.
Don\'t worry I\'m always willing to help.
Have a nice day!!!
Thank you!!!! Enjoy your vacation!!!
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Sam.
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In advance, I want to say that i seem to not be able to take lesson on Friday.
>>In advance, I want to say that I may not be able to take a lesson on Friday.
At that day, I will travel to Haeundae in Busan with my wife and neighbors.
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Busan is 2nd city in Korea and Haeundae is one of most famous beaches in Korea.
>>Busan is 2nd biggest city in Korea and Haeundae is one of the most famous beaches in Korea.
I will wake up at 3 o\'clock and check the result of daily job of previous day.
>>I will wake up at 3 o\'clock and check the results of our daily job the previous day.
If no errors, we will start going out right away, if else, then i have to solve the problem until it will be completely solved.
>>If there are no errors, we will go out right away, or else, I have to solve the problem until it will be completely solved.
Please pray for me, sam.
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Anyway, Regardless of errors, I can\'t take a lesson.
>>Anyway, regardless of the errors, I can\'t take a lesson.
we will early start because it will take a about 6 hours by my own car.
>>We will start early because it takes 6 hours of travel by car.
See you next Monday and have a nice weekend.
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= BODY =
the difference between natural disasters and man-made disasters is that the former can not avoid it but the latter can avoid it.
>>The difference between natural disasters and man-made disasters are that the former can not avoid it but the latter can avoid it.
But now, if we establish a system of preparedness well, we can also do avoiding the former.
>>But if we establish a system of preparedness well, we can avoid the former.
To avoid the latter, we need to continue educating and managing.
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The absence of these mind will lead to an accident someday.
>>The absence of these precautions will lead to an accident someday.
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