Homework 7
학생이 쓴 원문
If you could go back in time and give yourself some advice, what would it be? Why? Give some examples.
If i could go back in time, I'll tell myself to study english speaking.
Because speaking english is equal to communicating with global world.
So It expend a width of chance about the jobs.
And do my best only one thing. because if you are specialized at certain things than any other, people cannot but help employing you.
강사 첨삭
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If you could go back in time and give yourself some advice, what would it be? Why? Give some examples.>>correctIf i could go back in time, I\'ll tell myself to study english speaking.>>correctBecause speaking english is equal to communicating with global world.
>>cBecause speaking English is equal to communicating with the global world.
So It expend a width of chance about the jobs.
>>So it can expand a variety of employment opportunitites.And do my best only one thing.
>>And do my best in only one thing.
because if you are specialized at certain things than any other, people cannot but help employing you.
>>Because if you are specialized at certain things than any others, people cannot help but employ you.
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