Homework 7/7

Happy Monday [이름]!

Thank you for answering the essay question. Keep having the interest to write more compositions to fully polish your writing skills.

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Here are my corrections for you.

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~T. Eunice ^^

There are variety of pollution in environment because of senseless human\'s action.

>> There are variety of pollution in the environment because of senseless human action.

However,if many people\'s thinking would be changed about nature, it can be changed better.

>> However, if people will realize that we need to conserve our nature then we can make a change.

For example, when we throw out the trash, we have to consider about recycling and also we can choose the public transportation instead of our own car and motorcycle.

>> Correct

These ways are not difficult to save environment.

>> These ways are not difficult to save the environment.

Therefore, in our lives, we have to think about nature many times, and also we do something even its small one.

>> Therefore, in our lives, we have to think about the nature and we also need to do something even it\'s a small act of kindness.