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A little amount of stress is good, but too much of it is detrimental^^
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According to psychology researchers, there are some positive effects of stress.
>>CORRECT!
First of all, it helps boost brain power.
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Low-level stressors stimulate the production of brain chemicals,
>> Low-level stressors stimulate the production of brain chemicals.
Then, it motivates you to succeed.
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The key is viewing stressful situations as a challenge that you can meet, rather than an overwhelming, unpassable road block.
>>The key is to view stressful situations as a challenge that you can meet, rather than an overwhelming, impassable road block.
And it can make you more resilient.
>>Furthermore, it can make you more resilient.
Learning to deal with stressful situations can make future ones easier to manage.
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However, when stress becomes chronic, or when we feel we are no longer in control of a current situation, it negatively affects health and well-being.
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We can break stress into three categories.
>>We can classify stress into three categories.
It is conflict:when what you have and what you want is quite different.
>> It is conflict:when what you have and what you want are quite different.
It is pressure:when you need to do things faster and better.
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It is uncertainty:when you don\'t know what is going to happen.
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Therefore, we need to discern what my stress belongs to, and we should take the best solution out of them.
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