Homework

2016-12-09 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Writing task! I Wonder Why... Think of something you have wondered about and write about it. I wonder why the difference of boss and employee is. Several months ago, I wondered that question above. I guess that answer is firstly courage. Bosses around me were emplyees and then they had courage & decided to establish their own company. Of course, there are many qualification, but courage is the first and important qualification, I guess. These days I wonder good leadership and I learn about it via books.

강사 첨삭

Whew! You always impress me baby!
Great job!

You really are very good in expressing your opinions.

Keep up the good work...

Take care and have a great weekend!

xoxoTeacher Cam^^

HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Writing task!
I Wonder Why...
Think of something you have wondered about and write about it.
I wonder why the difference of boss and employee is.

>>I wonder what\'s the difference between a boss and an employee.
Several months ago, I wondered that question above.

>>correct
I guess that answer is firstly courage.

>>correct
Bosses around me were emplyees and then they had courage & decided to establish their own company.

>>correct
Of course, there are many qualification, but courage is the first and important qualification, I guess.

>>correct
These days I wonder good leadership and I learn about it via books.

>>correct

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