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2016-12-12 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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I am doing my homework listening to "You Raise Me up" sung by Josh Groban, with my eyes filled with tears. I absolutely agree with your gorgeous opinion that music has the ability to bring back memories. About 10 years ago, I really happened to listen to this song from a TV program when I was so depressed. I all of a sudden acknowledged the word "you" in the song as "God." Both of the melody and the lyrics of the song made me frozen for a long time even after it had been finished. What on earth an incredible song it was! No one expected me to fail being promoted, but I could not help but accept it. A couple of months before retiring from the army, I had been preparing for my future still holding a lot of grudge against myself and others. The song "You Raise Me up" was a "Good news" that literally raised me up at the time. I still thank God for letting me know this mysterious song. It must have been God's providence and gift for me. "You raise me up, to walk on stormy seas." Music is great.

강사 첨삭

Before anything else, let me thank you for the wonderful Christmas present I received this morning, Sir!

I was very happy as I opened the box :)

All of my favorite snacks are there^^

Furthermore, the pictures of your dog, Rookie plus your heartwarming letter made my day, Sir!

On the other hand, I remember the song, \"You Raise Me Up\" when I think of my mom, and vice versa.

I know she\'s in a better place, but listening to the song still gives me teary eyes.

It is a pleasure being with you every morning :) See you!

I am doing my homework listening to \"You Raise Me up\" sung by Josh Groban, with my eyes filled with tears.

>>CORRECT!
 I absolutely agree with your gorgeous opinion that music has the ability to bring back memories.

>>CORRECT!
 About 10 years ago, I really happened to listen to this song from a TV program when I was so depressed.

>>CORRECT!
 I all of a sudden acknowledged the word \"you\" in the song as \"God.\" 

>>I, all of a sudden, acknowledged the word \"you\" in the song as \"God.\" 
 Both of the melody and the lyrics of the song made me frozen for a long time even after it had been finished.

>>CORRECT!
 What on earth an incredible song it was!

>>CORRECT!

No one expected me to fail being promoted, but I could not help but accept it.

>>CORRECT!
 A couple of months before retiring from the army, I had been preparing for my future still holding a lot of grudge against myself and others.

>> A couple of months before retiring from the army, I had been preparing for my future still holding a lot of grudge against myself and the others.
 The song \"You Raise Me up\" was a \"Good news\" that literally raised me up at the time.

>>The song \"You Raise Me up\" was a \"good news\" that literally raised me up at the time.
 I still thank God for letting me know this mysterious song.

>>CORRECT!
 It must have been God\'s providence and gift for me.

>>CORRECT!
 \"You raise me up, to walk on stormy seas.\"

>>CORRECT!
 Music is great.

>>CORRECT!

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