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Before anything else, let me thank you for the wonderful Christmas present I received this morning, Sir!
I was very happy as I opened the box :)
All of my favorite snacks are there^^
Furthermore, the pictures of your dog, Rookie plus your heartwarming letter made my day, Sir!
On the other hand, I remember the song, \"You Raise Me Up\" when I think of my mom, and vice versa.
I know she\'s in a better place, but listening to the song still gives me teary eyes.
It is a pleasure being with you every morning :) See you!
I am doing my homework listening to \"You Raise Me up\" sung by Josh Groban, with my eyes filled with tears.
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I absolutely agree with your gorgeous opinion that music has the ability to bring back memories.
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About 10 years ago, I really happened to listen to this song from a TV program when I was so depressed.
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I all of a sudden acknowledged the word \"you\" in the song as \"God.\"
>>I, all of a sudden, acknowledged the word \"you\" in the song as \"God.\"
Both of the melody and the lyrics of the song made me frozen for a long time even after it had been finished.
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What on earth an incredible song it was!
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No one expected me to fail being promoted, but I could not help but accept it.
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A couple of months before retiring from the army, I had been preparing for my future still holding a lot of grudge against myself and others.
>> A couple of months before retiring from the army, I had been preparing for my future still holding a lot of grudge against myself and the others.
The song \"You Raise Me up\" was a \"Good news\" that literally raised me up at the time.
>>The song \"You Raise Me up\" was a \"good news\" that literally raised me up at the time.
I still thank God for letting me know this mysterious song.
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It must have been God\'s providence and gift for me.
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\"You raise me up, to walk on stormy seas.\"
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Music is great.
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