HOMEWORK
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Yesterday I had a really bad day.
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>> Yesterday, I experienced a really awful day.
I woke up at 9 o\'clock because I forgot to set my alarm clock the night before.
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>> I got up at 9 o\'clock because I forgot to set my alarm clock before going to bed.
I got up as fast as I could and I put on some clothes.
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>> I got up quickly and put on my clothes.
I ran into the kitchen and made myself a cup of coffee.
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>> I rushed into the kitchen and poured myself a cup of coffee.
Then I drank the coffee very fast and I ran to my car.
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>> I gulped the coffee quickly and ran towards my car.
It was a terrible morning!
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>> It was a really bad morning!
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