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2016-12-19 · 첨삭 강사 Summer

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Yesterday I had a really bad day. I woke up at 9 o'clock because I forgot to set my alarm clock the night before. I got up as fast as I could and I put on some clothes. I ran into the kitchen and made myself a cup of coffee. Then I drank the coffee very fast and I ran to my car. It was a terrible morning!

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Hello there [이름]! Wow! You were very quick to submit your homework today! Very good! You can check my alternative sentences later. I hope you have a nice day at work. Thanks a lot! Bye! Bye!

T.Summer^^

Yesterday I had a really bad day.

>> Correct

>> Yesterday, I experienced a really awful day.

I woke up at 9 o\'clock because I forgot to set my alarm clock the night before.

>> Correct 

>> I got up at 9 o\'clock because I forgot to set my alarm clock before going to bed.

I got up as fast as I could and I put on some clothes.

>> Correct

>> I got up quickly and put on my clothes.

 I ran into the kitchen and made myself a cup of coffee.

>> Correct

>> I rushed into the kitchen and poured myself a cup of coffee.

Then I drank the coffee very fast and I ran to my car.

>> Correct

>> I gulped the coffee quickly and ran towards my car.

 It was a terrible morning!

>> Correct

>> It was a really bad morning!

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