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2016-12-22 · 첨삭 강사 Janice

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If i were sent back to my childhood, i would have more leisure life time to spare without worry. The reason is I had a school life that must do study without playing and enjoying to take my university entrance examination. When I had free time, I played with my friends, but I always had thought and considering that " I should have study now ". So If I were sent back to past, I'm going to spending my precious and valuable time to my leisure just like traveling and swimming without worrying to study.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!


Thank you for doing everything you can.


If I were sent back to my childhood, I would spend it for leisure life. Not having to worry about anything.


My reason is that I had no time to play or to enjoy life when I was studying, particularly when I was preparing for the University entrance examinations.


When I had a free time, I played with my friends, but I always thought that \"I should go back home immediately to study\".


So, If I were sent back to the past, I would spend most of my precious and valuable time for leisure such as: travelling and swimming. No more worrying about studying.


I like your answer [이름]. I would do the same thing too. ^^


You did a good job.


Have a good rest


^^ T. Janice


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