homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Thank you for doing everything you can.
If I were sent back to my childhood, I would spend it for leisure life. Not having to worry about anything.
My reason is that I had no time to play or to enjoy life when I was studying, particularly when I was preparing for the University entrance examinations.
When I had a free time, I played with my friends, but I always thought that \"I should go back home immediately to study\".
So, If I were sent back to the past, I would spend most of my precious and valuable time for leisure such as: travelling and swimming. No more worrying about studying.
I like your answer [이름]. I would do the same thing too. ^^
You did a good job.
Have a good rest
^^ T. Janice
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