Homework

Thank you very much!

This composition of yours made me smile again. Now I know your whereabouts.

I hope that you could do this more often. I really appreciate it.

I would like to take this chance to praise you for getting so many \"correct\" marks. I can barely count them!

I hope that you will be more motivated to write and speak English. Of course, expose yourself to more English materials by reading and listening to audio books and the like. There are plenty of materials for you to choose from. You may also share them with your family. Please extend my greetings to them.

Happy holidays!

Until our next chat, James.

ALL THE BEST!

-Klein-

[1] How\'s your day with your son?
The second semester was finished and started winter vacation for my son.
>>The second semester is over and winter vacation for my son has started.

I met my son today and he had to move from dormitory in Incheon to studio in Seoul Sinchon.

>>I met my son today and he had to move from a dormitory in Incheon to a studio in Sinchon, Seoul.
 I started early to Incheon with my wife by car and I met him at 11:00 am.

>>Correct
 He had to say goodbye the dormitory because the semester was finished.
 >>He had to say goodbye to the dormitory because the semester is over.

In 2nd grade, he will study in Seoul Sinchon.
>>Correct (Sinchon, Seoul)

OR >> In his second year, he will study in Sinchon. Seoul.

So he rent a house near by Yonsei university in Sinchon during 1 year.
 >>So, he will rent a house nearby Yonsei University in Sinchon for one year.

We unload the baggage to rent house.
 >>We unloaded the baggage to the rented house.

After that My wife, son and I are came back to Gumi together.
 >>Correct

My son will spend the Christmas with family in Gumi.
 >>My son will spend Christmas with our family in Gumi.

Today I drove a car for a long time so I am very tired.
 >>Correct

The weather is rainy today and it gave me a more fatigue.
 >>The weather is rainy today, which gave me more fatigue.

I hope to go to bed right now..
>>Correct
[2] What was the most recent dissension you’ve been in?
 My job in the company is acquiring some certification in our product.
 >>Correct

In order to get a certification, I have to send the sample to certification institution.

>>In order to get a certification, I have to send the sample to the certification institution.

The sample was made in our factory by machine and factory engineers.
 >>Correct

They have to make good samples but if the factory process condition is not good, the sample quality is bad.

>>Correct

At that time I ask to fix the problem and remake the sample.

>>Correct
 The factory engineer wants to skip though there is a problem but I don\'t agree with it.

>>Correct

In that case we had a dissension but we find a good result and solve the problem by argument.

>>In that case, we have a dissension but we find a good result and solve the problem by argument.