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2016-12-26 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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What do you have to say about the spirit of Christmas? ==> I think the Christmas spirit is "sharing". When I was a child, I waited the Santa Claus at Christmas Eve. Because Santa Claus gave me a present at Christmas. The present what I received at Christmas gave me a good impression. Santa Claus tried to deliver a lot of present for children at cold weather. He hoped that many children felt a delight when they received a present. Santa Claus delivers a delight and I think it is a kind of sharing.

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Thank you for sharing! Now I feel the spirit of Christmas even more. We were all once made to believe that there\'s Santa Claus, who embodies the virtue of sharing. After some time, we\'d figure out that it\'s always been in our hearts. I know that you would instill this virtue in your children. Way to go, James! I want you to know that I always wish you and your family the best. Season\'s greetings! Always, -Klein- What do you have to say about the spirit of Christmas?==> I think the Christmas spirit is \"sharing\". >>CorrectWhen I was a child, I waited the Santa Claus at Christmas Eve. Because Santa Claus gave me a present at Christmas.>>When I was a child, I waited for Santa Claus at Christmas Eve, because Santa Claus gave me a present at Christmas.The present what I received at Christmas gave me a good impression.>>The present I received at Christmas gave me a good impression.Santa Claus tried to deliver a lot of present for children at cold weather. >>Santa Claus tried to deliver a lot of presents for children in cold weather.He hoped that many children felt a delight when they received a present.>>CorrectSanta Claus delivers a delight and I think it is a kind of sharing. >>Correct!  

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