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I think that the most important and worth things in the world are family and health.
First, the reason why family is important is that there is no me without family so it cannot be emphasized enough that the importance of family.
Second, health is personally important to me. I didn't know the importance of health in all my life before i got sick. When I got sick I realized the importance of health. Judging from my experience people can't do anything without health.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
I think the most important things in this world are family and health.
First, family is the most important for me because without my family I won\'t be me.
Second is health. Health is one of the most important thing for me not until I got sick. I only realized the importance of health because of what happened. Judging from my experience anyone can be useless without health.
Well done Lee!
Keep it up!
Take care!
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