Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Creative Writing
Looking into the conception of time, between Monday and Friday is longer than between Friday and Monday. The former sensory time will be much longer than the letter on workers and students.
If people enjoy their work and study,the former pass faster than the letter because people who enjoy their work or study look forward to the letter time.
since early years, I didn't like homemade-food because I loved eating out and restaurant food but when I lived apart from my family I was sicked and tired of eating out as I always ate out with university senior and junior.
So after that I'm starting to eat eat doenjang stew,traditional Korean homemade food, same as the people who love homemade food.
강사 첨삭
Hi Lucy!
Here\'s the correction.
Since my early years, I didn\'t like homemade food.
I love eating outside and/or ordering food at restaurants.
but when I left home for the university.
I got sick and tired of eating out where I had to eat with Senior and Junior University students.
After that I started eating doenjang stew which is a traditional Korean homemade food.
Good Job!
T Janice^^
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