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2016-12-27 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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Creative Writing: Write about a random act of kindness you've done for someone or someone has done for you, no matter how small or insignificant it may have seemed. -> When I was a trainee of army, one of my seniors helped me so kindly and he affected a lot on my life as soldier for 2 years. When I become senior, I also treat well to new trainees.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, Jacob!^^

Happy Tuesday!

It\'s good to know that simple acts of kindness leave impacts to people lives.

Me too, I still remember my teacher when I was in kindergarten who taught me how to treasure friendship.

Thank you for doing your homework.

I\'ll talk to you again tomorrow. Have a good night! :)

_T. Mayleen :)

When I was a trainee of army, one of my seniors helped me so kindly and he affected a lot on my life as soldier for 2 years.

>> When I new in the military, one of my seniors helped me. He was so kind and he left an impact on my as a soldier for 2 years.

When I become senior, I also treat well to new trainees.

>> When I became a senior, I treated the newbies well, too.

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