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2016-12-29 · 첨삭 강사 Janice

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Essay Question: What is the most memorable experience you've had in our class? Sorry, I'm late. And I checked it just now, but I want to answer it to you! There are so many times that I spent with you, and everytime was so happy, happy, happy and nice! So I won't forget it. The most memorable experience I've had in our class is your encouragement. When I feel sad or angry because of my dad, when I worried about my exams, when I concerned about my mother's health, you always encouraged me not to dispressed. Thanks to your encouragement, I can endure every tough moment. Really really really thank you. Today, this clock, 10;40, I miss you sooooooo much. T_T Hope you had a nice Christmas, and happy new year.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!


This is teacher Janice. I\'ll be the one to check your homework.


I know you\'re busy but you still found time to do it. ^^




I spent lots of time with you, we always had a happy, cheerful, pleasant  and nice time together.


So I will never forget about it.


The most memorable experience I\'ve had in our class was your encouragement.


When I felt sad or angry of my dad, when I\'m worried about my exams, when I was concerned about my mother\'s health, you were always there to encourage me and not be depressed.


Thanks for your encouragement, I can now endure every tough moments.


I really really appreciate you as my teacher and my friend.


It\'s already 10:40 in the evening and I miss you soooooo much. T_T


Hope you had a nice Christmas, and have a happy new year.




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