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2016-12-27 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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An Accident My friend Bob Jones (had) a motorcycle accident on Highway 41 yesterday. Fortunately, a passing police officer (saw) him (lied) on the side of the road and (called) an ambulance. He (took) to the nearest hospital. He (was) fine now even though he (had) a broken leg and bruises all over. His doctor (expected) to release him in two or three days. Bob (told) me that he (didn't speed/negative). He (thought) the accident (caused) by the bad condition of the road.

강사 첨삭

Good morning Miss [이름]!

I hope you are doing great today.

Thanks for doing your homework despite your busy schedule.

I am looking forward to talking with you today. See you later. ^^


~Teacher Shanee^^,


An Accident

My friend Bob Jones (had) a motorcycle accident on Highway 41 yesterday.

>>> Correct!

Fortunately, a passing police officer (saw)

>>> Correct!

him (lied)

>>> lying

on the side of the road and (called) an ambulance.

>>> Correct!

He (took) to the nearest hospital.

>>> was taken

He (was) fine now even though he (had) a broken leg and bruises all over.

>>> is, has

His doctor (expected) to release him in two or three days.

>>> expects

Bob (told) me that he (didn\'t speed/negative).

>>> Correct!

He (thought) the accident

>>> Correct!

(caused) by the bad condition of the road.

>>> was caused


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