Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Are there any famous stories of friendship in your culture?
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Yes! Actually, korean old literature's topic is usally like this : a didactic morality, filial piet. So I find an movie which has a topic of friendship! It's title is <Children of heaven>. In this movie, problem children prepare school musical, and while preparing them, they learned friendship, and love from teacher. I watched it on TV, and it was not bad to watch. See you later~ :)
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This looks interesting! @( ∙ • ∙ )@
Yes! Actually in Korea there\'s an old literature about friendship (a didactic morality, filial piety) So I found a movie which is about friendship! The title is (Children of heaven). In the movie, their were problem children who were attending musical school. During their learning process, their teacher loved them dearly and were taught about friendship. I watched it on TV and it was not bad at all. See you later. ~ :)
Practice makes perfect!
T. Janice
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