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2016-12-29 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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In what area do you think you stink? What do you do about it? ==> In my case, I think I stink in my work. I changed my job 7 months ago and I am studying about solar photo voltaic certifications.But there are various situations that I have to solve it. I'm not good at my job because of it. There are a lot of things to study but I don't have enough time. So If there is a problem or a question about solar Photo voltaic module, I need my colleague's help. And another problem is my memory. I really studied hard but I could not remember what I studied. I am older and older, my memory capacity does smaller and smaller. Anyway I know my problem about my job so I tried to write down what I learned. And I spoke out what I studied for remembering. I think the best way what I have to solve the problem is effort.

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You can do it, James! We sure are getting older each day but let\'s look on the bright side - we are also getting wiser. What do you think? Please agree with me. Just give it your all in everything you do, so you won\'t have regrets. I bet someone appreciates your efforts. Now that you know where you stink and you really are doing something about it. Keep it up! Have fate that it will soon pay off. Thank you for being open, James. May you continue to have a safe time! -Klein- In what area do you think you stink? What do you do about it?==>In my case, I think I stink in my work.>>Correct I changed my job 7 months ago and I am studying about solar photo voltaic certifications. >>Correct But there are various situations that I have to solve it. >>But there are various situations where I have to solve it.I\'m not good at my job because of it. >>CorrectThere are a lot of things to study but I don\'t have enough time.>>CorrectSo If there is a problem or a question about solar Photo voltaic module, I need my colleague\'s help.>>CorrectAnd another problem is my memory. >>CorrectI really studied hard but I could not remember what I studied.>>CorrectI am older and older, my memory capacity does smaller and smaller.>>I am getting older and older, so my memory capacity is getting smaller and smaller.Anyway I know my problem about my job so I tried to write down what I learned.>>CorrectAnd I spoke out what I studied for remembering.>>And I spoke out what I studied for retention.I think the best way what I have to solve the problem is effort. >>I think the best way to solve the problem first is to exert effort.

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