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2016-12-30 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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In which occasions do you choose to stick it out? ==> When I have to level up my skill, for example English speaking ability, I stick it out for it. I started the English speaking for better life. After retirement, I hope to go overseas trip more easily. At that time, English speaking ability is very useful for me. I don't have enough time for it, but I decided to learn English speaking. For that, I have to decrease my sleeping time. It is hard to wake up early for English class, but I choose morning class for participating many times. If I do the evening class, It's hard to join the class. Because In the evening, come back home time is not fixed and there are a lot of parameters. Anyway I will stick it out for studying English and I hope to speak English fluently.

강사 첨삭

Oh my, James! This is such a revelation. I just hope that this will not harm your health. Please try to get more sleep. Grab every opportunity to take a nap at work as well. I\'m just glad that you are still motivated to be better at speaking English. Let us give it our all, my friend! Thank you very much for always completing your homework. I appreciate all your efforts. Thanks for being with me this year, though only for a month it\'s truly worthwhile. Catch you next time! HAPPY NEW YEAR, JAMES! -Klein- In which occasions do you choose to stick it out?==>When I have to level up my skill, for example English speaking ability, I stick it out for it.>>Correct I started the English speaking for better life. >>I started speaking English for better life.After retirement, I hope to go overseas trip more easily.>>After retirement, I hope to go on overseas trips more easily. >>After retirement, I hope to go on an overseas trip more easily. At that time, English speaking ability is very useful for me.>>At that time, English-speaking abilities are very useful to me. >>At that time, an English-speaking ability is very useful to me.I don\'t have enough time for it, but I decided to learn English speaking.>>I don\'t have enough time for it but I decided to learn speaking English. For that, I have to decrease my sleeping time.>>Correct It is hard to wake up early for English class, but I choose morning class for participating many times.>>It is hard to wake up early for an English class, but I chose a morning class so I can participate many times. If I do the evening class, It\'s hard to join the class.>>Correct Because In the evening, come back home time is not fixed and there are a lot of parameters.>>Because in the evening, I come back home at irregular times, so there are a lot of parameters. >>Because in the evening, I don\'t come back home at a fixed time, so there are a lot of parameters.Anyway I will stick it out for studying English and I hope to speak English fluently. >>Correct!

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