Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
[1] How important or unimportant is it to stick to one’s guns?
Explain your answer.
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In my case, I stick to my guns when I have a confidence.
But I try to listen another people's opinion.
If it is reasonable, I can change my opinion for better decision.
I hope to make a right decision when I have to decide.
I don't think I always have a good decision, so I believe that I have to listen a different opinion.
After final decision, I stick to my opinion.
[2] What are your goals for 2017?
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I make goals for 2017.
First, I will do exercise 3 times per week for my health.
I have to loose weight for my body.
So I try to go gym after work.
Second, I will do study English 30 minutes per day except our English class.
My goal for learning English is fluent speaking and understanding what foreigner say.
After I achieve my goal, I want to travel abroad freely after retirement.
Third, I will do read a book per 1 month.
I don't have a time for that but I know it is just excuse.
I will try to reading books for my emotional health.
Have a prosperous new year... Klein.
강사 첨삭
You just made me smile again, James!
HAPPY NEW YEAR! This is the first composition that I checked this year. Now, I truly am looking forward to receiving more from you. You always share a piece of yourself whenever you do so, which I love most. I hope that you see improvements in your writing now, which is somehow translate to how you speak. You assured me once that you check everything, so expect for many lesson points and reminders from me, my dear. If there\'s anything that you won\'t understand, you can always tell me. I am here to be of help to you the best way I can, my friend.
Allow me to remind you of your New Year\'s resolutions as well.
Thank you very much!
I am so excited to speak with you again.
Please wait for my call, James!
Keep safe and regards to your family.
-Klein-
[1] How important or unimportant is it to stick to one’s guns?
Explain your answer.
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In my case, I stick to my guns when I have a confidence.
>>In my case, I stick to my guns when I have confidence.
Explain your answer.
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In my case, I stick to my guns when I have a confidence.
>>In my case, I stick to my guns when I have confidence.
>>In my case, I stick to my guns when I am confident.
But I try to listen another people\'s opinion.
>>But I try to listen to other people\'s opinions.
>>But I try to listen to other people\'s opinions.
If it is reasonable, I can change my opinion for better decision.
>>Correct
>>Correct
I hope to make a right decision when I have to decide.
>>Correct
>>Correct
I don\'t think I always have a good decision, so I believe that I have to listen a different opinion.
>>Correct
>>Correct
After final decision, I stick to my opinion.
>>After the final decision, I stick to my opinion.
[2] What are your goals for 2017?
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I make goals for 2017.
>>Correct!
First, I will do exercise 3 times per week for my health.
>>First, I will exercise for three times per week for my health.
>>After the final decision, I stick to my opinion.
[2] What are your goals for 2017?
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I make goals for 2017.
>>Correct!
First, I will do exercise 3 times per week for my health.
>>First, I will exercise for three times per week for my health.
>>First, I will do some exercises thrice per week for my health.
>>Firstly, I will exercise thrice every week for my health.
I have to loose weight for my body.
>>I have to lose weight for my body.
So I try to go gym after work.
>>So I try to go to gym after work.
Second, I will do study English 30 minutes per day except our English class.
>>Second, I will study English for 30 minutes per day except our English class.
>>So I try to go to gym after work.
Second, I will do study English 30 minutes per day except our English class.
>>Second, I will study English for 30 minutes per day except our English class.
>>Secondly, I will study English for 30 minutes every day other than our English class.
My goal for learning English is fluent speaking and understanding what foreigner say.
>>My goal for learning English is to fluently speak and understand what foreigners say.
>>My goal for learning English is to fluently speak and understand what foreigners say.
After I achieve my goal, I want to travel abroad freely after retirement.
>>Correct!
Third, I will do read a book per 1 month.
>>Third, I will read a book per month.
>>Correct!
Third, I will do read a book per 1 month.
>>Third, I will read a book per month.
>>Thirdly, I will read a book every month.
I don\'t have a time for that but I know it is just excuse.
>>I don\'t have time for that but I know it is just an excuse.
>>I don\'t have time for that but I know it is just an excuse.
I will try to reading books for my emotional health.
>>I will try to read books for my emotional health.
Have a prosperous new year.. Klein.
>>I will try to read books for my emotional health.
Have a prosperous new year.. Klein.
>>Correct!
OR >> Have a prosperous year, Klein.
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