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I remember that I made a lot of New Year\'s resolutions TT
However, they vanished one by one TT
Thank you for your composition, Sir!
I am very excited to hear your voice^^
The New Year stands before me like a white piece of paper.
>>CORRECT!
I set my New Year\'s resolutions in respect of what I will draw on the fresh paper for my life.
>>CORRECT!
Firstly, I will attempt to change my thought concerning my age.
>>CORRECT!
I have lived just two thirds of my life, so more than a third of my whole life still could remain.
>> I have lived just two thirds of my life, so more than a third of my whole life is still remaining.
Secondly, I will lose weight and exercise more.
>>CORRECT!
Especially, I will work out with my wife because the doctor demanded my wife to work out more when she was in the hospital.
>>CORRECT!
I am responsible for her to be into the exercise.
>> I am responsible for her to be into exercising.
Thirdly, I will continuously pay my mind debts from some people whom I have owed so far.
>>CORRECT!
There are some old aged people who could not wait for me.
>>There are some old-aged people who could not wait for me.
Lastly, I will read a book per week, dozens of books a year.
>>CORRECT!
Books, needless to say, are an excellent way to gain of knowledge on a huge variety of topics, and also a great exercise for my brain.
>> Books, needless to say, are an excellent way to gain knowledge on a huge variety of topics, and also a great exercise for my brain.
In conclusion, setting my New Year\'s resolutions must be the first step to make sure that it is a great picture of my life.
>>CORRECT!
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