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2017-01-04 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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The challenges the next generation will face will be environmental issues or natural disaster such as tsunami by environmental problems. Yesterday I read news that Alask's residents left their home because of the issues,which increased surface of the water, and because of melting ice, which caused their home to be washed out to sea. If we don't solve these problems and hand over to the next generation, It will be very shame and terrible to them. The next generation will be ask us two questions, " What were you thinking?, Why didn't you act?"

강사 첨삭

Hi, Lee!


Thank you for this wonderful ideas that you imparted.

I appreciate this a lot.

I hope that you still share more of your ideas.

I encourage you to do that. ^^

Have a good evening!


_Teacher Dianne ^_^


The challenges the next generation will face will be environmental issues or natural disaster such as tsunami by environmental problems.

>> The challenges that the next generation will face will be environmental issues or natural disasters such as tsunami or related with environmental problems.
Yesterday I read news that Alask\'s residents left their home because of the issues,which increased surface of the water, and because of melting ice, which caused their home to be washed out to sea.

>> Yesterday, I read a news that Alaska\'s residents left their homes because of the issues which increased the surface of the water and because of melting ice that caused their homes to be washed out to the sea.
If we don\'t solve these problems and hand over to the next generation, It will be very shame and terrible to them.

>> If we don\'t solve these problems and hand or pass them over to the next generation then It will be very shameful and terrible to them.
The next generation will be ask us two questions, \" What were you thinking?, Why didn\'t you act?\"

>>  The next generation will ask us two questions, \" What were you thinking? and Why didn\'t you act?\"

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