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2017-01-04 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Would you stick your neck out for your friends? Have you done it before? ==> If I have to stick my neck out for my friends, I will do it. Because I think that friends are important to me for my life. If they have some trouble and I can help them, I will try to solve the trouble with my friends. In my case, I don't have experience like that.

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I knew it! You are that kind of person, James. I can feel it. Thank you for opening up here once more. I\'m glad to get an affirmation of how I came to know you. I bet many of your friends will do the same for you. Take care of all your relations, my friend. More importantly, take good care of yourself. And before I let you go, I want to congratulate you for making really good sentences. I only provided few suggestions. Way to go! Until our next chat, James! -Klein- Would you stick your neck out for your friends?Have you done it before?==> If I have to stick my neck out for my friends, I will do it. >>CorrectBecause I think that friends are important to me for my life. >>Correct OR >> If I have to stick my neck out for my friends, I will do it, because I think that my friends are important to me.If they have some trouble and I can help them, I will try to solve the trouble with my friends.>>CorrectIn my case, I don\'t have experience like that. >>In my case, I don\'t have that experience. >>In my case, I don\'t have that kind of experience. >>In my case, I don\'t have a similar experience.

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