Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Would you stick your neck out for your friends?
Have you done it before?
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If I have to stick my neck out for my friends, I will do it.
Because I think that friends are important to me for my life.
If they have some trouble and I can help them, I will try to solve the trouble with my friends.
In my case, I don't have experience like that.
강사 첨삭
I knew it! You are that kind of person, James. I can feel it. Thank you for opening up here once more.
I\'m glad to get an affirmation of how I came to know you. I bet many of your friends will do the same for you.
Take care of all your relations, my friend.
More importantly, take good care of yourself.
And before I let you go, I want to congratulate you for making really good sentences. I only provided few suggestions.
Way to go!
Until our next chat, James!
-Klein-
Would you stick your neck out for your friends?Have you done it before?==> If I have to stick my neck out for my friends, I will do it.
>>CorrectBecause I think that friends are important to me for my life.
>>Correct
OR >> If I have to stick my neck out for my friends, I will do it, because I think that my friends are important to me.If they have some trouble and I can help them, I will try to solve the trouble with my friends.>>CorrectIn my case, I don\'t have experience like that.
>>In my case, I don\'t have that experience.
>>In my case, I don\'t have that kind of experience.
>>In my case, I don\'t have a similar experience.
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