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Hello, William!
FYI: For the average beer drinker, the difference between an ale and a lager comes down to how the beer looks, smells, and tastes.
Ales tend to be fruity, while lagers are clean-tasting and frequently described as \"crisp.\"
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I drank a lot of ale.
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It is bitter than lager.
>> It is much bitter than lager.
You exactly didn\'t know that draft less bitter than lager.
>> You didn\'t really know that draft beer is less bitter than lager.
I absolutely love draft ale.
>> I absolutely love draft beer and ale.
I was happy when I found a new pub by accident.
>> I was happy when I stumbled upon that new pub by accident.
One of the disadvantages are expensive so I spent a lot of money yesterday.
>> One of the downsides to that is it\'s expensive so I spent a lot of money yesterday.
It is ten thousand won of the one mug.
>> One mug costs 10 thousand won.
Sanmiguel is one of the popular lager in Korea.
>> San Miguel is one of the popular beers in Korea.
One scene in Master movie, 이병헌 drank your country beer with another actor.
>> In one scene in the movie, \"Master\", Lee Byunghun drank your country\'s beer with another actor.
Facebook is the largest social network on the web in terms of traffic.
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Primarily (1) focus on students, Facebook has been gaining market share
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*focused
(2) constantly and more significantly a supportive user base nowadays.
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Since their launch in 2004, they have been able to obtain over 20 million users in the U.S. alone and (3) expand worldwide to other English-speaking countries, with more to follow in the future.
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