Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What are the things that you cannot stand?
Also, make a list of the things that you try to tolerate to the best of your abilities.
Explain each answer briefly.
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The thing I cannot stand is that I watch my son playing games at night.
He did not sleep at night for playing games.
So he doesn't wake up in the morning.
I hope to eat breakfast together in the weekend morning.
I shout to him in the morning "Hey, wake up"
I don't like shouting but my son makes me crazy.
The thing that I try to tolerate to the best of my ability is studying English.
As you know, I have a lot of work in the company so I always tired after work.
I hope to go to bed early but I have to finish the homework. So I go to bed late.
And I have to wake up early for my English class.
I just get a sleep during 4 hours a day.
I have a dream that I will go overseas trip after retirement.
At that time I hope to use English fluently. So I can endure this situation.
강사 첨삭
Oh, my James. How I wish you could get more rest! Lack of sleep may affect your health badly.
I just hope that on weekends, you find time to unwind. Take it easy, my friend.
Honestly, I appreciate all your efforts for this class. THANK YOU VERY MUCH!
I hope that your diligence may influence your son positively.
Why don\'t you sign him up for an English class, as well?
Think about it.
And, I won\'t hold on to you too long. I\'ll let you go now, so you can rest.
Keep safe, James!
-Klein-
What are the things that you cannot stand?Also, make a list of the things that you try to tolerate to the best of your abilities.Explain each answer briefly. ==> The thing I cannot stand is that I watch my son playing games at night.
>>The thing I cannot stand is watching my son playing games at night.He did not sleep at night for playing games.So he doesn\'t wake up in the morning.
>>He does not sleep early at night to play games, so he doesn\'t wake up in the morning.I hope to eat breakfast together in the weekend morning.
>>I hope to eat breakfast together with my family on weekend mornings.I shout to him in the morning \"Hey, wake up\"
>>I shout at him in the morning, \"Hey, wake up!\"I don\'t like shouting but my son makes me crazy.>>CorrectThe thing that I try to tolerate to the best of my ability is studying English.
>>CorrectAs you know, I have a lot of work in the company so I always tired after work.
>>As you know, I have a lot of work in the company, so I am always tired after work.I hope to go to bed early but I have to finish the homework. So I go to bed late.>>Correct
OR >> I hope to go to bed early but I have to finish the homework, so I go to bed late.
And I have to wake up early for my English class. >>Correct
I just get a sleep during 4 hours a day.>>I just get 4 hours of sleep every day.
I have a dream that I will go overseas trip after retirement. >>I have a dream to go on overseas trips after retirement.
>>I dream of going on overseas trips after retirement.
At that time I hope to use English fluently. So I can endure this situation.
>>Correct!
OR >> By that time, I hope to speak English fluently, so I can endure this situation.
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