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2017-01-05 · 첨삭 강사 Summer

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What are the things that you cannot stand? Also, make a list of the things that you try to tolerate to the best of your abilities. Explain each answer briefly. ==> The thing I cannot stand is that I watch my son playing games at night. He did not sleep at night for playing games. So he doesn't wake up in the morning. I hope to eat breakfast together in the weekend morning. I shout to him in the morning "Hey, wake up" I don't like shouting but my son makes me crazy. The thing that I try to tolerate to the best of my ability is studying English. As you know, I have a lot of work in the company so I always tired after work. I hope to go to bed early but I have to finish the homework. So I go to bed late. And I have to wake up early for my English class. I just get a sleep during 4 hours a day. I have a dream that I will go overseas trip after retirement. At that time I hope to use English fluently. So I can endure this situation.

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Oh, my James. How I wish you could get more rest! Lack of sleep may affect your health badly. I just hope that on weekends, you find time to unwind. Take it easy, my friend. Honestly, I appreciate all your efforts for this class. THANK YOU VERY MUCH! I hope that your diligence may influence your son positively. Why don\'t you sign him up for an English class, as well? Think about it. And, I won\'t hold on to you too long. I\'ll let you go now, so you can rest. Keep safe, James! -Klein- What are the things that you cannot stand?Also, make a list of the things that you try to tolerate to the best of your abilities.Explain each answer briefly. ==> The thing I cannot stand is that I watch my son playing games at night. >>The thing I cannot stand is watching my son playing games at night.He did not sleep at night for playing games.So he doesn\'t wake up in the morning. >>He does not sleep early at night to play games, so he doesn\'t wake up in the morning.I hope to eat breakfast together in the weekend morning. >>I hope to eat breakfast together with my family on weekend mornings.I shout to him in the morning \"Hey, wake up\" >>I shout at him in the morning, \"Hey, wake up!\"I don\'t like shouting but my son makes me crazy.>>CorrectThe thing that I try to tolerate to the best of my ability is studying English. >>CorrectAs you know, I have a lot of work in the company so I always tired after work. >>As you know, I have a lot of work in the company, so I am always tired after work.I hope to go to bed early but I have to finish the homework. So I go to bed late.>>Correct OR >> I hope to go to bed early but I have to finish the homework, so I go to bed late. And I have to wake up early for my English class. >>Correct I just get a sleep during 4 hours a day.>>I just get 4 hours of sleep every day. I have a dream that I will go overseas trip after retirement. >>I have a dream to go on overseas trips after retirement. >>I dream of going on overseas trips after retirement. At that time I hope to use English fluently. So I can endure this situation. >>Correct! OR >> By that time, I hope to speak English fluently, so I can endure this situation.

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