Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, Lee!
It\'s nice to know that you care about the environment. ^^
Yes, you\'re right.
The kinds of car you like are eco-friendly.
I hope that you can buy one for you soon.
Thank you for answering your homework.
_Teacher Dianne ^_^
If I\'m going to buy a new car, I will purchase SUV.
>> If I\'m going to buy a new car, I will purchase an SUV.
At first I had interest about the car, I didn\'t like SUV but during my military service I got into the car such as SUV for 2 years, at that time I remembered that SUV is more comfortable than a small car.
>> I had an interest about cars at first. I didn\'t like SUV\'s before, but during my military service, I got into cars such as an SUV for 2 years and from that time I remembered that an SUV is more comfortable than a small car.
But in reality I get a chance to buy a new car, i might buy a small car because of economic conditions and environment conditions.
>> But in reality, if I get a chance to buy a new car, I might buy a small car because of its economic and environmental conditions.
If a solar battery car and an electric car become commercialization and generalization to many people and country, These kind of cars will be included to my purchase list because these car are efficient and eco-friendly.
>> If a solar battery car and an electric car become commercialized and general to many countries or people, they will be included to my purchase list because these cars are efficient and eco-friendly.
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