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How do you feel about standing on your own two feet?
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I think Independence is very important thing for us.
We should learn to stand on our own two feet.
When I was young, I got a lot of help from my parents.
But I got older, I had to learn how to live alone.
In my case, I left my hometown When I was 20 years old.
I entered university in Daegu, So I started my own life.
After I got a job in Gumi, I moved to Gumi for my job.
I learned the money for a living.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for sharing your inspiring story with me, James!
How I wish I can truly be independent. Sometimes, I simply think I can\'t. I\'m so scared to take risks but sooner or later, I better have the courage to stand on my own two feet. I can sense that you are also teaching your son to do the same. Keep it up!
I must also say that you are continually doing a great job in completing your compositions. You will see another bunch of \"Correct\" marks below. I have inserted a few recommendations for further improvement.
Once again, thank you.
Catch you tomorrow!
-Klein-
How do you feel about standing on your own two feet?
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I think Independence is very important thing for us.
>>I think independence is a very important thing to us.
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I think Independence is very important thing for us.
>>I think independence is a very important thing to us.
We should learn to stand on our own two feet.
>>Correct!
>>Correct!
When I was young, I got a lot of help from my parents.
>>Correct!
>>Correct!
But I got older, I had to learn how to live alone.
>>But when I got older, I had to learn how to live alone.
In my case, I left my hometown When I was 20 years old.
>>But when I got older, I had to learn how to live alone.
In my case, I left my hometown When I was 20 years old.
>>Correct (Do not capitalize When.)
I entered university in Daegu, So I started my own life.
I entered university in Daegu, So I started my own life.
>>Correct (Do not capitalize So.)
After I got a job in Gumi, I moved to Gumi for my job.
After I got a job in Gumi, I moved to Gumi for my job.
>>After i got a job in Gumi, I moved in.
I learned the money for a living.
I learned the money for a living.
>>I learned how to make money to live.
>>I started working as an engineer for a living.
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