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Thoroughly made decisions are the best^^
I strongly believe that the decisions we make for ourselves are the excellent ones :)
However, whenever we doubt something, it never hurts to consult other people^^
When I am making an important decision, what causes me to make a fiasco?
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Firstly, prejudice is a culprit of it.
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Anyone is blinded by love when he or she is in love.
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In other words, anyone preoccupied by some prejudice easily makes a decision about something inappropriately.
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Secondly, time limitation is another contributor of it.
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Any fraudulent people tend to force victims hurry when they make a decision.
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Time limitation prevents us from our objective estimate of the situation.
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Lastly, my strong instinctive desire is also an enemy in making a best decision.
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Objective others don\'t have any prejudice, any time limitation and personal strong desire about something that you are so obsessed right now.
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Your mentor can objectively give you some appropriate advice.
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Even a piece of advice really matters and works.
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That is why you should always get the advice of others when you are making an important decision.
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