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2017-01-09 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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When I am making an important decision, what causes me to make a fiasco? Firstly, prejudice is a culprit of it. Anyone is blinded by love when he or she is in love. In other words, anyone preoccupied by some prejudice easily makes a decision about something inappropriately. Secondly, time limitation is another contributor of it. Any fraudulent people tend to force victims hurry when they make a decision. Time limitation prevents us from our objective estimate of the situation. Lastly, my strong instinctive desire is also an enemy in making a best decision. Objective others don't have any prejudice, any time limitation and personal strong desire about something that you are so obsessed right now. Your mentor can objectively give you some appropriate advice. Even a piece of advice really matters and works. That is why you should always get the advice of others when you are making an important decision.

강사 첨삭

Thoroughly made decisions are the best^^

I strongly believe that the decisions we make for ourselves are the excellent ones :)

However, whenever we doubt something, it never hurts to consult other people^^

When I am making an important decision, what causes me to make a fiasco?

>>CORRECT!
 Firstly, prejudice is a culprit of it.

>>CORRECT!

Anyone is blinded by love when he or she is in love.

>>CORRECT!
 In other words, anyone preoccupied by some prejudice easily makes a decision about something inappropriately.

>>CORRECT!
 Secondly, time limitation is another contributor of it.

>>CORRECT!
 Any fraudulent people tend to force victims hurry when they make a decision. 

>>CORRECT! 
Time limitation prevents us from our objective estimate of the situation.

>>CORRECT!
 Lastly, my strong instinctive desire is also an enemy in making a best decision.

>>CORRECT!
 Objective others don\'t have any prejudice, any time limitation and personal strong desire about something that you are so obsessed right now.

>>CORRECT!
 Your mentor can objectively give you some appropriate advice.

>>CORRECT!
 Even a piece of advice really matters and works.

>>CORRECT!
 That is why you should always get the advice of others when you are making an important decision.

>>CORRECT!


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