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What can you sacrifice for your dream?
-Hmm ,, I reference to study even if it is so hard for the dream.
So, I have a dream for me at the expense of.
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What can you sacrifice for your dream?
>> Correct
-Hmm ,, I reference to study even if it is so hard for the dream.
>> I think, I will sacrifice my time studying hard to achieve my dream even though it\'s hard for me.
So, I have a dream for me at the expense of.
>> I have a dream that I want to achieve at the expense of studying hard.
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