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When was the last time you stood someone up?
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My daughter always ask to me "Daddy, what time will come back home today?"
I sometimes said to her "I will go home early today and have a dinner together"
But whenever I had a promise to my daughter, I usually came back to home late because of heavy work. My daughter waited me and she was angry whenever I came back home late.
When was the last time someone stood you up?
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I had a plan to meet my friends on January 7th in Seoul.
They live in Seoul, so I planed to go to Seoul for an appointment.
The appointment was decided on December 17th in 2016.
The morning of the Jan.7, I sent a message for my friends.
Where is the meeting place and meeting time?
There was no answer so I canceled to go to Seoul.
After a while, they called me " Oh. I'm sorry I forgot our appointment"
So We had an another to meet together.
강사 첨삭
What an experience! We certainly have a share of such in this lifetime. Good thing these days, it\'s easier to let someone know that you cannot make it with the smartphone and the like.
Nonetheless, the feeling that builds up whenever an appointment is canceled still stings. I hope you won\'t make such promise to your beloved daughter again, so she won\'t be disappointed. You would be in trouble, my friend. Also, you would hear her nagging you. You don\'t want that.
Once again, thanks for sharing!
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Until the next one, James!
I will call you tomorrow. I hope I won\'t be stood up by you.
Keep safe!
-Klein-
When was the last time you stood someone up?==>My daughter always ask to me \"Daddy, what time will come back home today?\"
>>My daughter always asks me, \"Daddy, what time will you come back home today?\"I sometimes said to her \"I will go home early today and have a dinner together\"
>>I sometimes told her, \"I will go home early today and let\'s have dinner together.\"But whenever I had a promise to my daughter, I usually came back to home late because of heavy work.
>>But whenever I had a promise to my daughter, I would come back home late because of heavy work.
My daughter waited me and she was angry whenever I came back home late.>>My daughter waited for me and she was angry when I came back home late.When was the last time someone stood you up?==>I had a plan to meet my friends on January 7th in Seoul.
>>CorrectThey live in Seoul, so I planed to go to Seoul for an appointment.
>>Correct (spelling check: planned)The appointment was decided on December 17th in 2016.
>>CorrectThe morning of the Jan.7, I sent a message for my friends.>>The morning of Jan.7th, I sent a message to my friends.
Where is the meeting place and meeting time?>>Where is the meeting place and when is the meeting time?
>>When and where should we meet?
There was no answer so I canceled to go to Seoul.>>There was no answer, so I canceled my appointment to Seoul.
After a while, they called me \" Oh. I\'m sorry I forgot our appointment\">>Correct
So We had an another to meet together.
>>So we had another one to meet.
>>So we had another one to get together.
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