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2017-01-10 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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To my experience, both quality and quantity are significant for performing our duties. Every mission given to us naturally requires both time limitation and quality work. If your boss orders you, " Turn in your drawing of a tiger within two hours," you will have to do your best to submit your good work within the time limit. I believe that someone who can do things quickly also has an ability to be able to do things better if time is available. I like to do things quickly: getting up from my bed, taking a shower, eating meals, walking with my Rookie, and the like. Contrary to them, I like to speak slowly, and I like to think slowly and deeply before making a decision. I used not to allow myself to be procrastinated, but I began to enjoy being slow when getting older. For young people, training themselves with both quickness and endurance is indispensable to survive in such a competitive world. Someone says, "Your thought changes your behavior, your behavior changes your habit, and your habit changes your life."

강사 첨삭

This is impressive, Sir!

What you said had an impact^^

Sadly, some people try to rush everything without deliberately thinking about it~

Let me express my gratitude for the wisdom you always share to me~

See you tomorrow!

To my experience, both quality and quantity are significant for performing our duties.

>>To my experience, both quality and quantity are significant in performing our duties.
 Every mission given to us naturally requires both time limitation and quality work.

>>CORRECT!
 If your boss orders you, \" Turn in your drawing of a tiger within two hours,\" you will have to do your best to submit your good work within the time limit.

>>CORRECT!
 I believe that someone who can do things quickly also has an ability to be able to do things better if time is available.

>>CORRECT!
 I like to do things quickly: getting up from my bed, taking a shower, eating meals, walking with my Rookie, and the like.

>>CORRECT!
 Contrary to them, I like to speak slowly, and I like to think slowly and deeply before making a decision.

>>CORRECT!
 I used not to allow myself to be procrastinated, but I began to enjoy being slow when getting older.

>> I used not to allow myself to procrastinate, but I began to enjoy being slow when getting older.
 For young people, training themselves with both quickness and endurance is indispensable to survive in such a competitive world.

>>CORRECT!
 Someone says, \"Your thought changes your behavior, your behavior changes your habit, and your habit changes your life.\"

>>CORRECT!

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