Homework

Hi, Lee!

Your composition was good.

Very well said.

I always appreciate your way of explaining.

Good job!

_Teacher Dianne ^^

Character and Personality.
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 There are lots of things people notice at their first meeting such as money,appearance,cloths and personality.
>> There are lots of things people notice about other people at their first meeting such as money, appearance, clothes, and personality.
Among these, I think that people\'s inner character and personality is more important than the rest things from my experiences.
>> Among these, I think, the personality or the inner character of people is the most important than the rest of the things mentioned from my experiences.
Nowadays, our world is influenced much by capitalism so many people tend to notice and estimate people in terms of finance and material elements.
>> Nowadays, our world is influenced much by capitalism, so many people tend to notice and estimate people in terms of financial and material status.

So when I meet a person,I want to see people\'s own character in itself regardless of money,appearance and so on.

>> So when I meet a person, I want to see her or his inner character regardless of money, appearance, and so on.