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2017-01-11 · 첨삭 강사 Charlie

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Composition Writing: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Classmates are a more important influence than parents on a child's success in school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Hmm... I think parents are a more important influence than Classmats on a child's success. Because live in school, children's personality is visible. When i go to school, I have two kind friend. one kind is I want to get along a friend, two kind is I don't want to be close to a friend. I think it's from parents.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! ^^


Thank you for answering the homework topic. ^^ Notice I added a few sentences at the end. This is done so that your answer would be more complete.


All good things,

==Teacher Charlie==



Hmm... I think parents are a more important influence than Classmats on a child\'s success. Because live in school, children\'s personality is visible. When i go to school, I have two kind friend. one kind is I want to get along a friend, two kind is I don\'t want to be close to a friend. I think it\'s from parents.

>> Hmmm... In my opinion, I think parents are a more important influence on a child\'s success than classmates. Since children spend a lot of time in school, their personality\'s can be observed. For example, in school, there are two kinds of people for me; the first kind are the ones I want to be friends with and the other one are those I don\'t want to be close to. These personality differences were influenced by their parents so that is why I think parents are a stronger influence on a child.

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