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According to the book titled \"the Fourth Industrial Revolution\", more than 4 billion people in the world are not still using the Internet and most of them live in the developing countries.
>According to the book titled \"The Fourth Industrial Revolution\", more than 4 billion people in the world are not still using the Internet and most of them live in the developing countries.
The Internet is run on computers and it connects millions of other computers.
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Computers are used as control systems for a very wide variety of industrial and consumer devices and also general purpose devices like personal computers and mobile devices as smartphones.
>> Computers are used as control systems for a very wide variety of industrial and consumer devices and also general purpose devices like personal computers and mobile devices as smartphones.
This is the Third Industrial Revolution called the computer revolution or the digital revolution.
>> This is the Third Industrial Revolution called the Computer Revolution or the Digital Revolution.
Now the Fourth Industrial Revolution is being built on the Third and we stand on the brink of a technology revolution that will fundamentally alter the way we live, work, and relate to one another.
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The emerging technology breakthroughs will be shown in fields such as artificial intelligence, robotics, the Internet of things, nanotechnology, quantum computing, and so on.
>> The emerging technology breakthroughs will be shown in fields such as artificial intelligence, robotics, the Internet of Things, nanotechnology, quantum computing, and so on.
Utilizing computers has already become a life-and-death matter in our lives.
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