Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
(1) How do you budget your salary?
My salary was decided by annual performance evaluating.
So I have to work hard for good results.
If my annual performance evaluation is good, my salary of next year will increase highly than bad performance people.
(2) Have you ever squealed on someone?
Sometimes I had squealed on my son.
As you know, he likes playing games and he went to bed late.
I don't understand why he does like that. I think the game is not useful for his life.
I really want him to be a healthy guy.
But his habit for sleeping is not good and I worry about that his health becomes bad.
Anyway he is adult now. I hope that he control the playing game time and use the time usefully for his life.
강사 첨삭
Always give it your best shot at work, James, just like what you do in our classes.
You sure are very diligent! Let\'s hope that your evaluation will be high, so you could get a big increase. That would be beneficial for you and your family!
Thanks for sharing! I also want to know how you budget your salary like for the expenses. It is like an allocation. Perhaps, we can talk about it tomorrow.
Please don\'t squeal on your son anymore. He\'s in a phase where he\'s still figuring things out. At least you\'re there to guide him. Just don\'t be too harsh, please. I sound like I am on his side. LOL No worries; I am still on your side.
Have a safe night, James!
Catch you tomorrow!
-Klein-
(1) How do you budget your salary?
My salary was decided by annual performance evaluating.
My salary was decided by annual performance evaluating.
So I have to work hard for good results.
>>My salary is decided by an annual performance evaluation, so I have to work hard for good results.
If my annual performance evaluation is good, my salary of next year will increase highly than bad performance people.
>>If my annual performance evaluation is good, my salary next year will increase higher than bad performance people\'s.
(2) Have you ever squealed on someone?
Sometimes I had squealed on my son.
>>Correct
>>My salary is decided by an annual performance evaluation, so I have to work hard for good results.
If my annual performance evaluation is good, my salary of next year will increase highly than bad performance people.
>>If my annual performance evaluation is good, my salary next year will increase higher than bad performance people\'s.
(2) Have you ever squealed on someone?
Sometimes I had squealed on my son.
>>Correct
As you know, he likes playing games and he went to bed late.
>>Correct
>>Correct
I don\'t understand why he does like that.
>>Correct
I think the game is not useful for his life.
>>Correct
>>Correct
I really want him to be a healthy guy.
But his habit for sleeping is not good and I worry about that his health becomes bad.
But his habit for sleeping is not good and I worry about that his health becomes bad.
>>I really want him to be a healthy guy but his habit for sleeping is not good, so I worry that his health might become bad.
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