homework!

Hello, my dear Emily.

Here are the corrections in your composition.

I think you answered the idea figuratively.

The meaning of lost in this sentence is lost in some place.

It doesn\'t mean losing yourself into something.

Maybe you can answer again!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~

TOPIC: Have you ever been lost? When and where? What did you do to find the right direction?
I\'ve been lost a one time,it was the second semaster of third grade.

>> I\'ve been lost a one time, it was the second semester of third grade.
 I need to study hard for my middle term,but I didn\'t do hard enough becasue of my cell phone.

>> I need to study hard for my middle term exams, but I didn\'t do hard enough becasue of my cell phone.

I was almost a cell phone addict.

>> Correct

I couldn\'t controll myself doing cell phone.

>> I couldn\'t control myself using my cell phone.

Obviously, I got the worst grade of my life. I was so shocked.

>> Correct

After taht, I tried to avoid the phone, using app that lock the phone untill the time that I set and think about my future.

>> After that, I tried to avoid the phone by using the app that locks the phone untill the time that I set and think about my future.

It\'s not easy but It\'s getting better gradually.
>> Correct
P.S Can you give me some advice if you have a nice way:)

>> Correct