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2017-01-12 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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(1) What are your unforgettable experiences during your military service? I don't remember the experience of the military service because I finished my service long time ago. But (2) What is your son up to these days? (You mentioned something like a joint training.) ^_= He enjoys his life in his room at Sincheon in Seoul. He reads books an watches movie in theater. Sometimes he meet his friend and shares his room. Also if he has a time, he went to the library for studying his major. (3) When you are almost done with a project but encountered some hassles and need to begin at square one, how would you feel? What would you do to beat the deadline?

강사 첨삭

This is such a pleasant surprise, James! I knew it! You could really make time for this task of yours so much earlier than usual. I am so happy for you. Keep it up! I hope you could share more. Perhaps, this is because the space here is limited. No worries; I\'ll discuss these matters with you again during our class, if you don\'t mind. Enjoy the rest of your afternoon! Take it easy there. -Klein- (1) What are your unforgettable experiences during your military service?I don\'t remember the experience of the military service because I finished my service long time ago. But >>I don\'t remember my experience in military service because I finished it long time ago.(2) What is your son up to these days? (You mentioned something like a joint training.) ^_=He enjoys his life in his room at Sincheon in Seoul.>>Correct OR >>He enjoys his life in his room in Sincheon, Seoul. He reads books an watches movie in theater.>>He reads books and watches movies in theater. Sometimes he meet his friend and shares his room. >>Sometimes, he meets his friend and shares his room with him.Also if he has a time, he went to the library for studying his major.>>Also, if he has time, he goes to the library to study his major. (3) When you are almost done with a project but encountered some hassles and need to begin at square one, how would you feel? What would you do to beat the deadline? I hope you can share your answer to these questions with me later.

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