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Hi Sir, thank you for turning in your homework^^
I envy you TT You have already experienced living in the US and Canada.
How I wish I could also experience that, even for a short time :)
Imagine how happier we could be if people learn how to respect one another^^
Fortunately, I was able to experience lives in both the US and Canada years ago.
>>Fortunately, I was able to experience living both in the US and Canada years ago.
Eventually, I learned the two multicultural societies were slightly different from each other.
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In multicultural societies, there are different models of racial integration.
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The US is traditionally called a \"melting pot\" because with time, generation of immigrants have melted together.
>>The US is traditionally called a \"melting pot\" because with time, generations of immigrants have melted together.
They have almost abandoned their culture to become totally assimilated into American society.
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However, In Canada, cultural diversity is considered a positive thing, immigrants have always been encouraged to maintain their traditions and their native language.
>> However, in Canada, cultural diversity is considered a positive thing, immigrants have always been encouraged to maintain their traditions and their native language.
This model of racial integration can be described as a \"salad bowl\", with people of different cultures living in harmony, like the lettuce, tomatoes and carrots in a salad.
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Multicultural society is now a reality in Korea as immigrants exceed a million.
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My experience concerning multicultural society changed my fixed idea into generous and flexible one.
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We must learn to live together in the best possible way, putting aside which is better: a melting pot or a salad bowl.
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