Homework
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How would you like to spruce up your room?
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I'm living in the apartment and there are 4 rooms in my house.
One room is for my wife and me. there is a bed and my wife, my daughter and me sleep in the room.
Second room is for my son. Third room is for my daughter.
And there are a lot of toys and clothes in the last room.
So I don't have room for me.
If I have a my own room, I want to decorate my room very smart.
There will be a projector screen on the wall and sound system in the room.
I want to see the movie at the room when I need a refresh.
And there will be a desk and a laptop.
I will study in the desk for our morning English class.
There will be a single bed for me.
I will use the bed when I want to take a rest.
Anybody cannot disturb me when I am in the room.
It is the room what I want to spruce up.
강사 첨삭
Now I know one of your dreams. Thank you for sharing, James!
How I wish you could have another room for yourself, so you can spruce it up according to your will.
How I wish you could have another room for yourself, so you can spruce it up according to your will.
No worries; some dreams come true, so hang in there.
Meanwhile, just enjoy how your wife spruces up your rooms.
I bet you also love the outcome.
Once again, thanks for being open. Until our next chat!
Stay safe and sound!
-Klein-
How would you like to spruce up your room?
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I\'m living in the apartment and there are 4 rooms in my house.
>>I\'m living in an apartment and there are four rooms in my house.
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I\'m living in the apartment and there are 4 rooms in my house.
>>I\'m living in an apartment and there are four rooms in my house.
One room is for my wife and me.
>>Correct
there is a bed and my wife, my daughter and me sleep in the room.
>>There is a big bed in that room where my wife, my daughter, and me sleep.
>>There is a big bed in that room where my wife, my daughter, and me sleep.
Second room is for my son.
>>The second room is for my son.
Third room is for my daughter.
>>The third room is for my daughter.
>>The third room is for my daughter.
And there are a lot of toys and clothes in the last room.
>>Correct
>>Correct
So I don\'t have room for me.
>>So I don\'t have a room for myself.
>>So I don\'t have a room for myself.
If I have a my own room, I want to decorate my room very smart.
>>If I had my own room, I wanted to decorate it very smartly.
>>If I had my own room, I wanted to decorate it very smartly.
There will be a projector screen on the wall and sound system in the room.
>>Correct
>>Correct
I want to see the movie at the room when I need a refresh.
>>I want to see a movie in that room when I need to refresh.
>>I want to see a movie in that room when I need to refresh.
And there will be a desk and a laptop.
>>Correct
>>Correct
I will study in the desk for our morning English class.
>>Correct
>>Correct
There will be a single bed for me.
>>Correct
>>Correct
I will use the bed when I want to take a rest.
>>Correct
>>Correct
Anybody cannot disturb me when I am in the room.
>>Correct
>>Correct
OR >> Nobody can disturb me when I am in the room.
It is the room what I want to spruce up.
It is the room what I want to spruce up.
>>Correct
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