Homework

Dear [이름],

A terrific Tuesday to you! ^.^

To start, I would like to say thank you.

Thank you for doing your homework and sharing your ideas with me through writing.

By the way, I also agree that violence is sometimes necessary.

In my case, I will also use violence to protect myself, so that my life won\'t be in danger.

In addition, we also need violence to take control of serious situations.

For example, for your children to behave well, you need to use a little violence to them.

Do you agree with me?

Anyway, don\'t forget to read the corrections and suggestion below.

Happy reading! ^^

See you tomorrow! ^^,

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

I agree the violence is sometimes necessary.
>> I agree that violence is sometimes necessary.
In a law there is a concept of a self-defense.
>> In the law, there is a concept of self-defense.
I think if my rights were damaged by other people by violence and It is in case of emergency,I have to use violence.
>> I think if my rights were violated by other people through violence, and it was in case of emergency, I had to use violence also.

>> OR: I think if my rights are violated by other people through violence, and it is in case of emergency, I have to use violence also.
 For example, if i\'m in battlefield raining bullets from all directions, I have to shot the gun and use violence because my live is dangerous.
>> For example, if I\'m in a battlefield and bullets are raining from all directions, I have to shoot and use my gun, because my life is in danger.
Of couse the violence wasn\'t abused and it is not desiable method.
>> Of course, violence in that kind of situation is not abused even though it is not a desirable method.
But i think sometimes the violence is necessary.

>> Therefore, I think violence is sometimes necessary.