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2017-01-16 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

학생이 쓴 원문

Talk about your favorite subject at school. My favorite subject is English. Becaus it's easy and fun than other subject. Also i like my English teacher .. !

강사 첨삭

Good evening dear [이름]!^^

Happy Monday!


Thank you for this composition.

Your favorite subject is English. However, you weren\'t in the mood today.

You were really very tired that you could not focus well in class.

Participate more next time. Okay?(^_-)

See you tomorrow!


_T. Mayleen_


Talk about your favorite subject at school.
My favorite subject is English.

>> Correct!


Becaus it\'s easy and fun than other subject.

>> Because it\'s fun and easier than other subjects.

BE CAREFUL WITH YOUR SPELLING.


Also i like my English teacher .. !

>> Also, I like my English teacher.

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