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2017-01-17 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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I have been inclined to live my plan-oriented life so far. Frankly speaking, I might have enjoyed it all my life long. We make a daily, weekly or monthly plan when we prepare for some exams and reports. On top of that, when we go on a vacation, we make it to spend time effectively. I have usually been following my procedures or formula for my successful life: Planning-Preparing-Executing-Analyzing(Feedback). All the four phases are equally significant. Planning has to be realistic and preparing must be critical in implementing the plan, such as purchasing some materials, surfing the Internet, and so on. The phase of analysis and feedback is also crucial because we can evaluate the interim results and renew the plan. However, we sometimes need our spontaneous life because it can refresh us and garner new energy for our near future. It may also blow us out. What's more, it's because I don't want be buried in standardized and normalized life.

강사 첨삭

 I don\'t know, but it makes me feel safe when I plan things.

I believe there\'s a high possibility of wasting more time, effort, and money when we do things hastily.

On the other hand, we sometimes want to experience adrenalin rush through spontaneous activities^^

See you, Sir!

I have been inclined to live my plan-oriented life so far.

>>CORRECT!
 Frankly speaking, I might have enjoyed it all my life long.

>>CORRECT!

>> Frankly speaking, I might have enjoyed it all my life.
 We make a daily, weekly or monthly plan when we prepare for some exams and reports.

>>CORRECT!
 On top of that, when we go on a vacation, we make it to spend time effectively.

>>CORRECT!
 I have usually been following my procedures or formula for my successful life: Planning-Preparing-Executing-Analyzing(Feedback).

>>CORRECT!
 All the four phases are equally significant.

>>CORRECT!
 Planning has to be realistic and preparing must be critical in implementing the plan, such as purchasing some materials, surfing the Internet, and so on.

>>CORRECT!
 The phase of analysis and feedback is also crucial because we can evaluate the interim results and renew the plan.

>>CORRECT!
 However, we sometimes need our spontaneous life because it can refresh us and garner new energy for our near future.

>>CORRECT!
 It may also blow us out.

>>CORRECT!
 What\'s more, it\'s because I don\'t want be buried in standardized and normalized life.

>>CORRECT!



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