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I don\'t know, but it makes me feel safe when I plan things.
I believe there\'s a high possibility of wasting more time, effort, and money when we do things hastily.
On the other hand, we sometimes want to experience adrenalin rush through spontaneous activities^^
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I have been inclined to live my plan-oriented life so far.
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Frankly speaking, I might have enjoyed it all my life long.
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>> Frankly speaking, I might have enjoyed it all my life.
We make a daily, weekly or monthly plan when we prepare for some exams and reports.
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On top of that, when we go on a vacation, we make it to spend time effectively.
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I have usually been following my procedures or formula for my successful life: Planning-Preparing-Executing-Analyzing(Feedback).
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All the four phases are equally significant.
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Planning has to be realistic and preparing must be critical in implementing the plan, such as purchasing some materials, surfing the Internet, and so on.
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The phase of analysis and feedback is also crucial because we can evaluate the interim results and renew the plan.
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However, we sometimes need our spontaneous life because it can refresh us and garner new energy for our near future.
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It may also blow us out.
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What\'s more, it\'s because I don\'t want be buried in standardized and normalized life.
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