homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, Lee!
Yes, you\'re right that art is one of the ways to express oneself.
This is a way to show how creative a person is.
I hope that the next generation will pursue the art from the past and explore more about it.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts again.
See you tomorrow!
_Teacher Dianne ^^
Art will be the most important ways to express and embody the one reflection of the society.
>> Art is one of the most important ways to express and embody the society.
So if our descendants see art which contains those things, they will be able to know the past history,our image and life style through the art.
>> So if our descendants see art which contains those things, they will be able to know the past history, our image and lifestyle through art.
As we did so, our descendants will speculate about possible links between art and society.
>> Eventually, our descendants will speculate about possible links between art and society.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.