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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, Lee!
I\'ve heard about Jeju a lot of times already.
I think, this is the best place to visit in Korea.
I hope that one day I would be able to do that.
Thank you for sharing.
_Teacher Dianne ^^
Our country consider tourism as very important but a struggle because we are worn out with busy and fixed life.
>> Our country considers tourism as a very important thing and a struggle at the same time because we are worn out with busy and stable life.
Our country has many great place to see,play,enjoy,travel,but people don\'t have lots of time to travel so almost the people go abroad instead of domestic travel.
>> Our country has many great places to see, where you can play on, enjoy, and travel, but people don\'t have lots of time to travel so almost people go abroad instead of traveling domestically.
So I want to introduce them only one island,Jeju, our county has because the island has very unusual and distinctive language,culture,food we can\'t usually see.
>> So I want to introduce them only one island and that is Jeju because this island has a very unusual and distinctive language, culture, and food that we don\'t usually see.
If they travel this place, they will be surprised.
>> If they travel to this place, they will be surprised.
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