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How do you feel about talking about an old flame?
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I don't worry about that someone say to me about my old flame.
I met my wife in the university and she also knew my old flame.
So I don't need to hide my ex-girlfriend to my wife.
Sometimes I compare my wife with ex-girlfriend and I think what is good or what is bad for me.
My conclusion is that My choice is good for me for my life.
My choice mean I got married my wife.
My ex-girldfriend just live in my past with a good memory.
Past is just past, I am focusing present for my family.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for sharing such a fragile chapter in your life, James.
I can say that I know so much about you now but I want you to know that I want to know more.
No worries; you can stop me any time, and I would be more than willing to share my stories as well when we get the chance. For now, this serves as a really good practice for you. Once more, thank you!
You should also be rewarded for all the \"correct\" marks you\'ve earned below. Nice one!
Until our next chat. Take it easy there, my friend.
-Klein-
How do you feel about talking about an old flame?==> I don\'t worry about that someone say to me about my old flame.
>>I don\'t worry that someone might tell me about my old flame.I met my wife in the university and she also knew my old flame.
>>CorrectSo I don\'t need to hide my ex-girlfriend to my wife.>>CorrectSometimes I compare my wife with ex-girlfriend and I think what is good or what is bad for me.
>>CorrectMy conclusion is that My choice is good for me for my life.
>>CorrectMy choice mean I got married my wife.>>My choice means I got married to my wife.My ex-girldfriend just live in my past with a good memory.
>>My ex-girlfriend just lives in my past like a good memory.Past is just past, I am focusing present for my family.
>>Past is just past, so I am focusing on the present for my family.
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