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2017-01-18 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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*I have worked in the insurance industry for over ten years. I worked for Met Life for six years and World Insurance for four and a half. During that time, I heard many good things about Hollings Life Insurance and that's why I applied for the new sales position. *In fact, I will compete in a tennis tournament this weekend. *Really, how long have you played tennis ? *I've played since high school. *I am currently working with them on the sea turtle project. We will try tocreate a wildlife sanctuary near the bay. *He is presently working on the same project. *I know Frank quite well. Any brother of Frank's would be a welcome addition to Hollings Life. Just one more thing, we are looking for somebody who is fluent in Spanish; many of our clients are from Mexico. *No problem. I have studied Spanish since elementary school.

강사 첨삭

I hope you slept well last night!

I am already excited to talk to you again.

See you later MISS [이름]!


~Teacher Shanee^^


*I have worked in the insurance industry for over ten years. I worked for Met Life for six years and World Insurance for four and a half.

>>> Correct!

During that time, I heard many good things about Hollings Life Insurance and that\'s why I applied for the new sales position. 

>>> am applying
 *In fact, I will compete in a tennis tournament this weekend. 

>>> am competing
 *Really, how long have you played tennis ? 

>>> have you been playing
 *I\'ve played since high school.

>>> have been playing
 *I am currently working with them on the sea turtle project.

>>> Correct!

We will try tocreate a wildlife sanctuary near the bay. 

>>> are trying to create
 *He is presently working on the same project. 

>>> Correct!
 *I know Frank quite well. Any brother of Frank\'s would be a welcome addition to Hollings Life. Just one more thing, we are looking for somebody who is fluent in Spanish; many of our clients are from Mexico. 

>>> Correct!
 *No problem. I have studied Spanish since elementary school.

>>> have been studying

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